Final Blog! #10

 Wow our last blog!!I have learn a lot during this semester. The most important thing that I learned was doing a Ts/Cd. To be honest I hated that idea in the begging.But later on when u kept giving us more assignments i learned to do them Not only I had to do the assignment but I was learning more information. For example I did not know about the miners that had gone stuck.That was very surprising and I learned about that and i kept practicing. Another good thing was learning to to the fill in the space with old information and new information.

I would definitely use this ideas in my papers and I am definitely showing these ideas to my friends.Learning all this information helped me be a better writer and I learned that If I want a better grade on a paper to really give it a long time. Also I've learned to CITE EVERYTHING! 

Thanks for being a great teacher and helping me when I needed help with my essays.Hopefully In the future you can still help me if I have problems with one of my essays.

Blog #9

Essay Four was one of my favorites because we actually got to go out and find an add that we liked.  I found a baby add that was advertising an university. I thought that it was an excellent way to get the attention of students. Because most student dont really pay attention to adds for colleges but this one really caught the eye of me and my sisters.It got me to think of what type of colleges their out there. This whole idea to write about an add was great because it got me to think on how many appeals a add uses.

Blog #8

I would say that I have meet some of these goals. I've understand that when I'm given a knew article I have to first analyze it and then read it out loud. Is better for me if I read a story or article out loud. I understand it better and that's when i see all the errors I've made.Also that I have to give evidence and examples to support my idea.

Also, It can be a good way to write a rough draft before doing the real thing. That can help you get started and not be in a blank when writing the final draft.Also. what its important to not put exclamation points everywhere because someone can get offended.

I think that i have meet some of these goals but I need to keep working on them to get better grades on my essays.